Terri Lynn Conaway

Lorain, Ohio

Born and raised in Avon, Ohio and single mother to two daughters and grandmother of 3. Terri served in the U.S. Army Chemical Corps at Ft. McClellan, Alabama.

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Confusion

I love the story line. I am able to imagine being side by side to your characters. But your character dialogue, paragraph structures are lacking. They need separation to have an increased flow in the story line.

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Hleo

Once you get through the first few chapters (like most books), the storyline drew me in. A refeshing way to look at destiny r fate. Not sure if a religious undertone was the goal, but for me it added to my own beliefs. The author could use the tweeking of more editing and proofreading, but all in all it is a great story!!! I would be interested in reading more about Ethan and Hannah!

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Amazing!

There are no words to properly describe this book! The imagination this author has is truly a gift. To create characters that are strong, gentle, caring (for monsters)...is like nothing I have ever read!

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Refreshing

I saw the comment that you are 18. I just want to let you know that your imagination to come up with this concept is incredible. Yes, you do need improvements with editing, grammar, etc. But your story line, dialogue and characters are refreshing to see and read from someone so young. I would change some thongs about the POV's. You tend to repeat a lot of the characters parts. I would limit some of the repetition when changing the POV's. Otherwise.... this is a refreshing new fantasy and I would love to read the second book when you are able to post it.

( Please consider reading and reviewing my book as well.... Tizanidine Dreams: True Love!)

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Details

Attention to detail kept my interests. The walk down memory lane and sights and smells were written very well. I only hope that there is anther part of the story to tell and will be looking out for it!

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