I like fucking with analypsis, but I got one review that said it's too confusing. Does anyone know any good techniques in doing flashbacks with a story that begins at the end? Can you do a flashback within a flashback? Or do you have to write it out and tell the whole background as opposed to having the reader re-living it?
Hi, I've had my book "Electron04" up for a little while, but it kind of feels messy. It would be great if someone would look at it... here's the link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/174065
It's about a boy named Jack, who finds a wristband that crashed into the woods outside his house. It transforms him into Electron04, a robot who is the defender of the universe. Jack now has to fight Raptroocrons, aliens that are trying to steal Earth's Life Magic. And when his friend/crush Jordan ... See More is targeted, Jack's job gets infinitely harder. He's not sure if he is strong enough to fight the strongest empire in the universe.
Anyway, thanks for looking at this, please give feedback!
I am a sixty-seven-year-old retired factory worker. I started writing short stories for fun. My main problem is grammar. I feel I need to go back to school or is there an alternative? Is there a better and quicker way to improve my skills? If someone wants to read one of my stories and rip me apart, it is ok, because it is the only way for me to become a better writer.
Open to Review swaps (just ask and I will get back to you)Bloom the first installment of The Kingdom of Archer series tells the story of Lyric Mason and Prince Parker Archer. Caught in the middle of a world where human males can transform into hybrid animals known as Novas and the world is divided in two. The Kingdom of Archer, a fair ruling kingdom and Cray; the kingdom of poverty and dictatorship. When Lyric is found to be the soulmate of not only Prince Parker but the evil Prince of Cray, ... See More Max. Lyric is caught in the middle of a tug of war and love.. Can Lyric, who has a painful past she wants to forget fit the role of queen an overcome her past demons and insecurities? Will love triumph over all? https://www.inkitt.com/stories/134198/chapters/1?preview=true
I still don't know how to post my story. I am lost on the net when it comes to computer. I am trying I watch videos that tell me how easy it is but when I look at my computer I don't see what is show on the video. It is bad enough that I am behind on my story,( my wife got a broken rib and last weekend the grandkid was in town) by 880 and Thankgiving is coming up and I have a doctor visit one day. This has me writing ever day I can and I need this because I have never done it before. Unless I ... See More can post my 10782 words are dying on the vine. I am fishing for any help I can get. I don't get writer's block because I always quit when I know my first two sentences for the next day. I don'tknow what anyone else does but that what I do and it works forme.
Wow! I don't know how to get more than my first chapter in. I have never done this before and if anyone can read my stuff the knives will be sharpen to peel me to the bone. I an sure there are more real writers than I on here, my wife think I am crazy to try to write for the fisrt time at 73 years old. I have no writer's block, but grammer and spelling can be a bit of a bear since I never learn to read til I was 50. But like my wife says I am crazy. If I can figure out how to do this I will be ... See More ready for the wolves.
Hey Guys, Here's my book Greek Girl.
What happens when 17 year-old Olympia Callis moves to Soho?
Well she finds out that her dad’s a Greek God and that she’s a Demigod.
Then, she finds out her new school is full of Demigods like her-Some Greek , Some from other cultures.
But, what happens when she’s dared to steal her principal’s most beloved anklet. Well she chickens out, but is framed for stealing it.
Then she just has a month to prove her innocence. Obviously, ... See More her new friends and ,not so obviously, the school’s bad boy help her out.
But will our sweet, little Greek Girl find it or will she just have to suffer punishment from the school board A.K.A. Olympus?
I hope the you guys can help me with some of the small errors I have. Thanks!
I need help with punctuality in my story the book is called "The Puppeteer". It is still a work in progress, but I need help on fixing it up. If you want to help fixing it, send me an email at:
And thanks again.
This is more of an idea at the moment. I wrote a story called "The Girl With Red Eyes". It was from the point of view of a girl named Red. I intend to continue the universe but I want to work on something else as well. I'm thinking doing a "What-If" story. It would cover the possible outcomes of certain invents and what they would have led to in the story if had gone that way.
I'm curious as of what this idea sounds like to others.
Afternoon, fellow writers!
I am looking for those who would be interesting in reviewing my book "Where The Green Grass Grows Through Rose-Tinted Glasses". I'd love any feedback or comments so that I may continue or edit my current writing style. Also, if you would like me to do the same for your work, I'd be more than happy to.
Thank you and cheers!
- E. Ravenwood
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