i doubt this will work but it's worth a try. I'm writing an adventure/action/ partly romance book that centers around a moroccan girl who becomes apart of a task force in D.C to find a certain item that could lead to the downfall of many countries and powerful people, along with it she discovers secrets about her family and why 4 of her cousins disappeared a few years ago.. It's called "The Last Dance" and I would really love some hard criticism because it's very special to me as it's not only ... See More about a muslim girl but it's my life's dream to write a spy-espionage that includes a main characters that can relate to me and my heritage. Also I don't have anyone to look it over so I don't know where my weak spots (well mainly all of these) are or if it's bland and it needs spice and my ugly grammar and the consistency of my story. Thank you for taking time to read this and I am willing to swap reviews with someone else as well. I may not write 100% gorgeously but I can beta-read pretty well.
Hey everyone, my name is Nada and I'm still a new writer here on inkitt. I would love if I get some feedback on my poetry book since I'm still 15 and I would like to improve and enhance my writing. The book has some parts that conveys my daily life while most of it is simply based on me trying to express my emotions when I fall into a brief state of depression due to regular family problems. I don't exactly know what my strengths and weaknesses in writing are so I wish of someone points them out
for me. Here is the link to my book called, "My Miserable Diaries". Thank you!
Does someone want to read an modern coming of age about an apathetic young man that comes to terms with his identity after his escapades through the world of high-end escorting? I'd love to swap stores.
Open to Review swaps (just ask and I will get back to you)Bloom the first installment of The Kingdom of Archer series tells the story of Lyric Mason and Prince Parker Archer. Caught in the middle of a world where human males can transform into hybrid animals known as Novas and the world is divided in two. The Kingdom of Archer, a fair ruling kingdom and Cray; the kingdom of poverty and dictatorship. When Lyric is found to be the soulmate of not only Prince Parker but the evil Prince of Cray, ... See More Max. Lyric is caught in the middle of a tug of war and love.. Can Lyric, who has a painful past she wants to forget fit the role of queen an overcome her past demons and insecurities? Will love triumph over all? https://www.inkitt.com/stories/134198/chapters/1?preview=true
Drystan, Temple Knight of Lyonesse, is sent to retrieve the betrothed of his uncle, the Duke of Tintagel. This simple journey will set into motion a parade of events that will upend the lives of three unsuspecting innocents and everyone they care about.
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"It all begins at 666 West Alchemy Road...
Secrets of Ravenstone follows the story of Yzavela; a young woman of demonic origins, who unexpectedly travels to Ravenstone where she's thrust into the supernatural and paranormal world. When she's chosen by an ancient orbstone, she's put through rigorous training while falling in love with the dangerously sexy vampire, Erik ... See More Sheng-su; a man who balances her fiery spirit."
Book 1 and 2 are posted on my profile in their entirety.
Book 1 https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/153589
Book 2 https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/153859
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A New chapter added to my current work in progress (20 chapters by now) Thriller/Mystery novel named 'The S Girl.' I would love if you people check it out and reviewing the story will be much helpful for me. All kinds of review including critiques and point outs will be truly appreciated.
'The S Girl' is a story about a Bangladeshi spy Saravi Hussain who's mission is to find a mysterious serial killer, and throughout her journey, she has been trapped by ... See More an unknown enemy. There's a conspiracy going on against her. But who could be the real culprit? If you are interested to know, then please read the novel below:
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Ten thousand years before the ancient civilization of Sumer rose to prominence in Mesopotamia, there were the Sag-gig-ga, or ‘Black-Headed People’ and they called their land Kur-gal.
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As any writer, my primary focus is engaging the reader, immersing them in the lives of the characters and providing a strong story that is coherent and easy to follow. I hope I have accomplished much of this for your ... See More enjoyment.
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Hello everyone, I'm rather new to this and have been an aspiring writer for a long time now. I've been working on this fantasy novel for some time now. I have more chapters ready to be submitted at any time but I would really appreciate some feedback!
Hello, I’m open to review swaps, I’m very new to this but eager to learn. My story is about a town called OakHill, where suddenly is hit with a series of murders and a few people disappearing. In the middle of that, 4 high school friends start to see a tall, skinny man stalking them but nobody believes them, because as far as they know, only them can see this creepy and mysterious man.
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