Emery Ravenwood

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In reviewing the first chapter . . .

. . . I really enjoyed your story so far. I love your writing style and liked how intimate the relationship between the reader and Nichol was. If there was one thing I could suggest that you do it would be to try slowing things down a bit. I'd like to get to know the characters a little slower, not all at once. I'd like to see how Nichol think and how she acts, but not all in the first chapter. Otherwise, I think this is a really great story, and I can't wait to finish reading it!

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You had me at the photo art . . .

. . . I was immediately drawn to the amazing cover photo that you used for this story. Once I read the blurb, I knew I had to keep reading, and it was so worth it. This story is incredible, and I very much enjoyed reading it. 10/10 for sure!

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