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Easily the best book I've read

Words can not describe how enthralled I was. I had to keep reading. The mystery was gripping, the love story had me cheering and crying with the characters, and the sense of profound relief I felt when The Evil was conquered is a true testament to your ability. Some might say that words are your magic.

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Fascinating!

Read the first 2 chapters, and I'm already hooked! There one or two things I wanted to point out: in medical descriptions, don't forget to clean out the wound! Especially with a crossbow bolt, if it went through the shoulder, it would be much harder to pull out than a regular arrow, may I suggest breaking the tip off on either end then pulling it out so the arrow tip doesn't tear the muscle or meat inside. Other than that, perfect so far!

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