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Legend of Earth

Loved this story! It was different and evoked the question, what if! Kudos to the author for a great read!

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Book of Rain

This was an excellent story. I liked that each chapter was about a different person, and how Rain helped the suffering and the lonely find peace. I also liked the way the author told Rain's story. My only gripe is that most of the time the author did not leave a space between the end of the sentences and the next word, which was very distracting, to say the least.

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written in blood

This is a story of a high school reunion that goes terribly, horribly wrong, and of those that lived to tell the tale. This story was suspense from the first word to the very last! I also loved the short chapters which made for easier reading breaks!! The only flaws in the story was the way some of the sentences were structured. Plus I liked this story, enough, even with it's flaws, to give it my vote.

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Wilde Ones

This was a great story filled with lots of twists and turns. that were full of edge of your seat, excitement and emotions to the very end. A must read!

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All Things Begin - The Anmah Series Book 1

This story had me mesmerized from the first word! I am now going to read book two, with the hopes that book three will be finished by the time I finish reading it, so I will not have to wonder how the story ends! Kudos for a fascinating story!

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The Phoenix King: The Awakening [Book 1]

This story did not disappoint. The murder of a king by his near kin. The hiding of the prince at the age of one, and his discovery at the age of fifteen, left me hungry for more. I hope the author finishes this story soon! NRF

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"The Waiting Room"

What can I say? I recently lost my husband to of 23 years, to colon cancer. This story grabbed my heart and wouldn't let go! My thanks to the author for this outlook on life and death, although unlike Paul, My Bruce never got to wake up. NRF

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The wardens: first hint of darkness

This is a story about monster hunters, magic and good surviving evil. It is not a bad story for what I assume is a first tine writer. Wishing you the very best! Have fun with your writing, I do! NRF

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Wayward stars

Great story, believable characters and unique plot! I wonder what I would have done if I were in Liam's shoes. Can he face his toughest demon of all or will he lose the battle . . . .

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The Aristarchus

This was a gripping story of unbelievable horror, raw nerve and the unstoppable will to live. It never said but I believe the whole population of Chiltern town knew who Kern was. And that they were punishing him for the sin of adultery his astronaut father committed, while doing the one thing that would isolate him from everyone. This story truly was food for thought. Kudos to the author!

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An's Workshop

This story was a hard one to rate. It was also hard to follow at times. And although it is a futuristic story, parts of made no sense to me, but as I do not play, nor do I have any desire to play computer games. It's only logical, that stories about them would not interest me! Good luck with your book, I wish you only the best! NRF

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Don't Stop Believin'

When I read Craig Hoffman's review I almost didn't read this story! But I'm so glad that I did, I even gave it my vote! This story is a page turner and had surprise twists all the way through! Kudos on a book well written.

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Genetics: 1159

Loved this story! It was so good that I could not put it down! Loved Jordon, Taylor, and Nona with their group of vigilantes. This story has a twist that will take your breath away! Kudos for a great story and hopefully a book two that ends CLU"S rein of terror once and for all.

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Abandoned lives

This book was awesome! Missing families, Ghosts, A satanic demon, named Kieran, Twins and a best friend / boyfriend. What more can you ask for, besides knowing where Cameron is!

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The Cradle Snatcher

This story had me from the first page! It was fast paced and believable, In an ideal world Sam would get better, and Detective Lauren Ryder and he would become engaged or married, And Peter O`Donnell, well I have a death wish for him! I look forward hopefully to a 2nd book.

NRF author of The Lost Souls of Gilfords Falls also on Inkitt.com.

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Caged

What can I say I read the first 3-4 chapters and thought, boring, then thought what the heck, it's only ten chapters, so I read the next chapter and thought what? Is Melody or April having a nightmare? Or was Stefen actually in a life threatening accident and these are nightmares from a fractured mind! Anyway the story turned out to be surprisingly sad but, delightfully different.,

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Darkest Secrets

This story starts with Shyanne going to a party where some guy manhandles her, the booze flows freely, and she gets drunk, the story goes down hill from there. What father lets their daughter (whether she's adopted or not, sleep with some on they just met?) The only saving grace in this story is the mystery of who has Shyanne, and who is Jasmine. I will be looking for the finished story, when I read the full story I will reevaluate my review. NRF

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Progeny

This was a fascinating story! I hope there is a book two.

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New Eden

I really liked the essence of this story, but I did not like all sexual descriptions, (as nothing was left to the imagination,) or the filthy language. The concept of a hand full of people settling a new earth is an awesome one, though, and for that I tip my hat to you, the author! NRF

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An Act of Vengeance

Book two was more of the same things Rory suffered in book one. Capture, escape, more capture and escape. and all by the same organization. The only thing that redeems this story is that Rory is only ten years old, and a hybrid of sorts, with powers that grow stronger, every time she is captured, tortured, and escapes . I will now read book three: An act of war, maybe it will redeem the author! NRF

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An Act of Gods

This is a story about a ten year old street orphan that gets into big trouble when she robs the wrong person. I like Rory's spunk, and her ability to adjust too everything that's thrown at her! I am now on book two of this series! Kudos to this author for originality and a great story! NRF

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Caloric

I liked this story a lot, but thought the plot was a little over done. Phoenyx wakes up in a 6foot x3 foot cell and discovers that Lily is also being held prisoner by an unknown party. Soon Sabastian and Skylar join them. Knowing only that they will be executed in three days they must escape their prison or die . . . . .

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Equinox: The return to Earth

Well I have read all three books, Equinox: Beginnings, Equinox: The rise of Jason, and Equinox: The return to Earth. And I can not believe the way this story ended! Come on, Yusuf R Shaik, What are you doing! Don't leave us hanging . . . Where do I get Equinox: timeless????? NRF

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Equinox: The rise of Jason

This is book two of Equinox: My one question: is there a method to Jason's madness? I guess we'll see in in book three, Equinox: The return to Earth . . . . . .

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Equinox: Beginnings

This story is about a prison ship and its prisoners. Jason is the main character in this story. It seems that among all of Jason's talents, which include a genius mentality, quick thinking and mind reading, he, at times has an ugly attitude, and a mean streak, that says my way or no way! I don't know whether I like this story or not, as I don't know where the author's plot is headed. I'm hoping that Jason gets a brain before he destroys himself and everything else with his undisciplined power!

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From An Office Window

When Chloe's car catches fire and Mitchell sees it from his office window, an unexpected friendship is formed. But as friendship gives way to deeper feelings, Chloe finds out that her husband, whom had vanished without a trace, and presumed dead, was very much alive . . . . . This story was a page turner with lots of twists and turns. a very enjoyable read! NRF

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Defying the Alpha

Although the story idea was a fresh one, the author's endless bragging and story interruptions that start at the end of chapter 18 and continue to the end of the book are very off putting, My first thought was people only compliment and brag on themselves because NO ONE ELSE DOES OR WILL. Sorry but all the little comments are not needed nor are they wanted when I read a book, therefore the low rating. My advice, stick to the story, and leave out the other nonrelative mumbo-jumbo! NRF

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Every 2 Minutes

This story will break your heart, and the sad part is that although this is written as a fictitious story, every single incident in this heartbreaking story is true, according to studies and research on leprosy! I was so hooked on this story that I read it in less then a day! Kudos to the author, I would buy her books in a heart beat! Keep up the good work! NRF

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Balloon Man

This story was as gruesome as they get, and at first I thought it was just a story of mayhem and the torture of children by a psychotic killer, but the more I read the more one chapter merged with another for a shockingly unforgettable ending!

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The Memory House

I definitely like your story.Twelve strangers from all walks of life wake up in a room together. Realizing they are all prisoners, with no way out of the house, they quickly chose sides, but when one by one the bodies start to pile up, panic and chaos follow as the accusations flow. . . . . I did not like the way this story ends at all, as it leaves the reader hanging, therefor I have not given it the 5* rating I would have given it, had it been the finished product. When and if the author finishes this tale of woe, and she informs me of its completion, I will change my rating accordingly. Thank you, NRF

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Excalibur ~ World from Ashes

Not my cup-a-tea kind of book. The story of a gang war in an apocalyptic world sounds fantastic, and it's a brilliant idea. I just can't get past Who the "lovers" are. Sorry . . .

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Make it Stop

This is one of the saddest stories I have read in a long long time! It is also a story that tells it like it really is, and Yes honor killings happen every day in every country in the world. thank you, floridatown, for sharing this truth with us, your reading audience.

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"The Inheritance"

this is part one of An Evil Family, and had me from the first chapter to the very last! The twists and turns, and suspense had me guessing to the very end! This was a great job by a great author!

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An Evil Family

This story had me from the first chapter to the very last! The twists and turns, and suspense had me guessing to the very end! This was a great job by a great author!

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"The Last Grey Sky"

Wow! This is a blow you away story in every sense of the word. kudos to the author for a story about a killer virus caused by seeing colors, mad scientists, torture, friends, sacrifice and death. I read it in less then a day.

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Bag Men: 2069

This story was fairly interesting, to say the least. A virus that is killing people, suddenly changes from zombie like status to almost human to survive the SAC BPH agents that track their victims who are called, sleepers. This is their story . . . . . NRF

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Vampire Protection Program

To me the title does not fit the story. Nowhere did I see vampires being protected. Although there were many mistakes in spelling and missing words, the story was enough to keep me reading it to the end! A thorough reediting of this book would make it 100 times better! Good luck with your book, and please reedit it to correct spelling, missing words and none sentences. NRF

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The Hidden Truth (Book 1 of The Hidden Truth Series)"

This is the story of Estrela Alice Montgomery, orphan, who has been told her family was dead, But now has proof that they are very much alive. With her friend Shayne, she leaves the orphanage on a quest to find them. This new twist on an old story had me mesmerized from the very beginning to ending. Now I'm looking forward to book two in hopes that it explains why . . . . NRF

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The Secret Carriers

Anise and five others are chosen to be secret carrier of information that is so secrete that those ready to pass it on to the next carrier, must die immediately afterwards. Only one person at a time may know the secrets they share. but one man, by the name of Gideon, Knows about the secrets, and will stop at nothing including murder to steal them for himself! This unusual story was very interesting, fast paced and attention grabbing.

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FOOTSTEPS TO MURDER

Wow, The picture for this story was really misleading! But the story more than made up for it as it was really different and the way it ended was a real surprise! Who'd have thought that so many would plot, do and escape unscathed! Kudos to you Michael for a great mystery! NRF

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An Assassin's Loyalties

There's only seven chapters to this work in progress so I haven't read enough of this tale to decide whether I like it or not! I do think however that the story has a riveting plot, but until the author finishes the story, I can not give it an honest review.

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Then All Things Become New - The Anmah Series Book 3"

What can I say! the third book was as awesome as the first! Three Kudos to the author, for three awesome books! I would definitely read more of this author and I would also buy her awesome books!

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But Peace Must End - The Anmah Series Book 2

This second book of the Anmah Series was as awesome as the first story, I disagree with spare runner. The names were ordinary names with different spellings, which I for one loved. I am now going to read the third book in this amazingly awesome story!

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"The Parallel"

this was a lesbian story, which is not my cup of tea, but it had a good plot and all of the Sidney's that weren't killed. were given a new lease on life. I guess all's well that ends well.   NRF

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Zero (Book 2)

i have read three chapters of this story and find it mildly interesting, because i don't usually read this kind of book, now my friend found it highly entertaining! so there you go! I am curious as to who's body they found in the cabin, and where Silver Solano disappeared to. And whether the body was that of Silver Solano's!

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The Queen that Time Forgot

This story ended to abruptly, I hope the author finishes writing this story, as I feel that it ended before it started. I want to know what happened to Berengaria. Did she ever rule as queen? Did Richard ever love her? Did she ever return to

her home land? As I said, this story ended to abruptly, and I hope the author finishes writing this story.

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Wiped (The Trapped Trilogy #2)" Author

Great story, this is book two of a trilogy, I am now reading book three.

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Trapped (Trapped Trilogy Book 1)"

Love this book! I have just added book to my reading list!

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Saving Ransom

I usually don't read this kind of story, but this one was an exception! I liked the basic story line, and the concept which is, abuse of anything or anybody should not, will not and is not acceptable! Kudos to the author! NRF

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The Rainbow Children

This story was okay, it just wasn't my cup of tea. I thought that some parts of the story dragged on far to long. It seemed to me that Garan Watts either whined or became angry over everything and anything that didn't go his way. All in all just because I wasn't particularly thrilled with the story, doesn't mean others won't be. Best of luck with your writing! NRF

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